Reviews for Saturday Mornings
Midnight Self chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
I liked it. But I would have liked it better if the two characters had more...personalization, I guess? The inner monologue with the female was pretty good. But some actual dialogue would have helped a lot.
RookieWriter chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Hot, and sweet at the end. I love that sweet bit. The "I love you"/"luckiest girl in the world" part. I'm a sucker for that.
Dill Wilson chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Who are they? It's a nice sex scene but as a one shot why should the reader care? Just a few lines of description of the characters would help the reader identify with the scene a little bit more. Husband-wife? Girlfriend-boyfriend? Brother-sister? Saturdays just because she doesn't have to work? Or because that's when they have sex most often?