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I KNOW it's been a considerable lump of time since you last had, well, time to write, but there has been other instances of people returning to stories that froze up for a while. It might just prove to be a fruitful endeavour to hint that your story is still red hot and collecting fans. There's hopefully not too much harm involved with trying. If you can't continue, I'll survive, but it would be great. Much love!

Oh my goshh I haven't read or been on in forever but your story is always getting better and better! I cannot wait to see how it will unfold after this! I am so intrigued by your characters and how it feels like it is set back in time, it is wonderful and I cannot wait for the next update! 3 And please ignore those who are saying negative things to you about your work, there are always going to be those who you cannot please and you shouldn't have to stop doing something you love because of people being

This is wonderful. I love fan-fiction but I needed a change so i decided to come here. I'm surprised that it is so enjoyable. I love the story so far. I love the aspect of politics though I get lost in it more than I understand it. I think you are doing a amazing job with you story. Best of luck.
P.S You have a few grammar mistakes but nobody perfect.

This was so good I can't wait for you to add in more scenes with Dawn standing up against the king. But i'm not too sure about the love triangles...they're not really my favorite but I'll see what you do with them.

WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?

As a fan of vampire stories/media, I appreciate the little jokes sprinkled throughout here. They're spot on about a lot of modern ones, and they even poke a little fun at their own story.

Another thing I appreciate is the fact that while there's a love triangle going on, it isn't quite the typical set up of Bad Boy vs. Nice Guy, with a flat girl character having to choose between them. While Dragos, Amaro, and Dawn do share passing resemblances to the average characters found in teen vampire romance books, they have enough complexity and differences to assure me that they aren't just following the usual formula. Dawn's own flaws are proof of that, and it really seems like they might get her in over her head with the arrival of Emilison-who's a great character, by the way. He radiates a cool confidence while giving a hint of this wild, chaotic streak within him. He doesn't come across as crazy, or even necessarily evil, just as someone who knows what he wants and how to get it. Like the rest of the cast, he's not easy to fit into a mold, which is a good thing.

Dun dun dun... shocker! I swear Emillisons motives have partialy been reveald, dawn better take care not to fall for his tricks I have a feelings theres more than he lets on...
Who knew Dragos was a shy teachers pet thats soooo adorable, wish you could write a flashback of him and his school days!
How did Emillison know about Dragos perferences? They couldn't have been that close to tell each others secrets, which begs the question does Emillison know all of Dragos's charecter and secrets or is he letting on that fact hmmmm?
The story was awesome as always and your right Dawn has her flaws cut out for her nobody's perfect so you did a great job making her character imperfect rather than understanding. That shows shes like any other person about their opinions of transgenders. Hope you update again soon we shall wait! And will always be loyal reviewers. Till next time!

are you writing luficer on purpose or is it a constant misspelling of lucifer? :p

This chapter was good, i like how you add history and culture to the machinations. Also, there are lots of spelling mistakes, a quick re-read should help u fix most of them

Haha! Great! This reminded me so much of Sherlock Holmes! Awesome chapter! I hope there is more witty plot bits like this in the following chapters! Wonderful!

How is she going to sneak a young boy out with her? I fear this is not going to go well and I just really hope it doesn't take Alex down with her.

:o what's going to happen? A test I see!

Woohoo! 100 reviews!

I find it really sad about Persephone... I wonder if the King with take after his father. Hm...

These chapters are a really nice size. I really like Dawn so far. She's a really strong, adaptable character and I totally appreciate that. Can't wait to read how tea goes!