Reviews for Vampire Consort
Redache2 chapter 11 . 9/6/2015
Thanks for not telling us her name... Cause if you had I would attack her back. I don't know you past your stories, but I can tell you that you are beautifully and wonderfully made and that I love your writing. I pray you find peace with who you are and know that you are loved by God. This is a season, and it will pass. God takes dirt and grime and turns it into beauty, so hold on. Gosh, I'm crying now... Hold on. I believe in you!
mimi chapter 11 . 9/6/2015
Hey its alright if you stop posting and take all the time you need your life is more important than anything else, just don't let that (friend) of yours put you down thats what she wants stand up to her and look her in the eye. Your stories are amazing and your talented dont lose hope in yourself.
anonymous chapter 11 . 9/5/2015
That's just horrible! I'm so sorry that this has happened to you. No one deserves such a treatment and I hope that you'll start feeling better very soon. Your former friend sounds like a terrible person and I hope you can block her and find some peace. Please that good care of yourself and until then we'll just have to wait :)
annayh44 chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
Stay Happyyyy & Healthyyyyy & Heartfulllll ! Keep Smiling :)
Lolaq chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
I'm lurker reader (if you can't tell)and have always enjoyed your stories. I'm sorry you are going through that ugliness. I wish you all the best!
NewMamma2013 chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
Please message me if you ever need an ear or shoulder. You are a complete stranger and even I know that what they are doing to you is horrible. From experience, I can tell you that things will get better. You will find yourself and find a comfortable group of friends or even just casual acquaintances to change your day-to-day life. Please don't cut or hurt yourself anymore. towriteloveonherarms?frefts Just reading stories of other strangers on TWLOHA has helped me see the better in myself, of life, and people. 3
blue.birds99 chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
I hate the person who is putting you in this state and making you feel so alone and unsure of yourself and others. That is wrong and absolutely disgusting and that person is a disgrace of a human being. I admire you for not mentioning his or her name, that shows that you are above that person and will not sink to their level. I think you are an amazing author and I hope that life will start looking brighter for you soon. I may not know you personally, but I know from your writing that you are very deep and talented and you do not deserve to be treated like this. Keep pushing through, stay strong, and remember that that person is way beneath you, and you will come out of this horrible experience a much stronger, tougher, and better person. I will miss this story, but I understand your reasons and completely agree that you put it on hiatus. I will pray for you, and I wish you the best of luck with college, job-hunting, the bully, and everything else.
Luti Faube chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
You've posted this on all your stories, and so it was impossible for me not to see this, and impossible for me not to help one of my favourite authors. This is absolutely awful of you, for this person to do this to you. Will you please give me their account name, so I can stop her bothering you? I don't know you personally, but you're an amazing writer and probably a beautiful person, your protagonists' personalaties reflect this. If you need an outlet, or support, or anything, please PM me. At the least I can report this horrible former friend of yours.
Carly Chameleon chapter 10 . 8/16/2015
One of the things I love most about your characters is how they can't really be pigeonholed. None of them quite fit into the common slots usually found in a genre. I especially appreciate this in Vampire Consort since so many modern vampire stories just rely on tired tropes.

Dragos is neither a heartless monster, nor just another misunderstood, brooding male lead with a tortured past. He is a product of his environment in many ways, but is aware of the fact and doesn't just blindly do things. And while he does have moments of kindness, just like in this chapter, he acknowledges and admits that he can't always afford them. The whole theme of masks is a perfect expression of the many facets he has to use. All people put on different personas throughout the day, while at work, at play, at school, with friends, with family, etc. It's no different with him.

It is interesting to hear he doesn't really know who he is at his core, but then again, many people don't. Even if he had some sense of it, putting a concrete definition to it would still probably prove difficult.

I liked the fact that Dawn's faith in humanity has been called into question. There can be no growth without a little doubt and examination from other angles. Also, if she never questions her beliefs, then it seems like she's just following them blindly. I'm curious to see what happens with her convictions.

On a related topic, I appreciated Dragos' explanation of how and why vampires took over. Some writers don't take the time to see things from a character's perspective, especially an inhuman one's. It makes perfect sense that vampires might step in to "save" and "correct" humanity from their own actions. The fact that they're long-lived might indeed provide some measure of stability, and I can see why some might consider it better to have them rule.

Great chapter, as always. :)
Vietnamese chapter 10 . 8/11/2015
anonymous chapter 10 . 8/9/2015
Oooohhh such an interesting chapter! I like that the background to this story is explained a bit. And their relationship is slowly progressing
Katarina chapter 10 . 8/8/2015
I've just started reading this story and absolutely love it! I couldn't stop reading. I so hated Dragos though for biting her and humiliating her in such a way! I do hope he will be the kind king we all have seen in the first chapters. Please don't make us wait to long for a new release.
annayh44 chapter 10 . 8/7/2015
Wow…FOR THE FIRST TIME, I found King is really kind~ I just hope he will always be this Kind~ ! Love this Chapter
Murriel chapter 10 . 8/7/2015
awesome awesome, been transfixed since i begun reading. Cant wait for the next chapter(s)
zerefRomanticgyal chapter 10 . 8/7/2015
OMG OMG. .. I kind of like this... its so cool and all... I do hope dawn will be dragos consort... I'm eager for tne next chapter. ..
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