Reviews for When Life Lies
Sunnycanary chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
:DDDD you just gave me a craving for cookies :P
I love his dad :) the cookies and artist package all bundled into one :P

Ooh his councillor and his dad... Nice plot twist you have there!

I look forward to reading the next chapters!

Sunnycanary chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
That was a great chapter, I enjoyed reading it a lot. I loved all his inner thoughts during the meeting with his councillor, and how he perceives Mr H.

I especially love how he dealt with the divorce. Usually people (or characters in other books I've read, at least) are shocked and depressed. I like how you made him already anticipate the divorce from two years ago.

I can't see any mistakes, so that's good :)

Great chapter overall, and congratulations on winning 3rd!

(I hope that was 100 words... :/)

The Gone Angel chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
GO MISSOURI! WOO! *cough* Sorry...Anyway, even though this chapter didn't have too much going on, I still enjoyed seeing what his parents (His dad, at least) were like! I've got a bad feeling that his lies will mess up something...

The Gone Angel chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
This is really good so far, Sri. :) It's very interesting and it has an unique plot-line. Well...divorces aren't unique, neither is help for them, but it's cool how you are coming up with a way to make it for that certain prompt and that he's lying for the fun of it.

I didn't notice any errors. Good luck. :)