Reviews for Dark Classrooms
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Oho O.O I like it

Very good! Fortunately for me I'm the kind of girl who can be called a freak, laugh maniacally, and then ask with a perfectly straight face, "What was your first clue?"

I like to disturb at least one person daily.

Honestly, it's not that hard when you have no ego.

That doesn't mean I can't sympathize with you, though. See, that's when you know you've made your message clear. When you reach the girl with no ego and little to no self consciousness.

In response to your review to riley:
Thanks! I was actually going for the literal kind of demons; we can't just pretend they don't exist, and one of my characters actually does get possessed by them in my allegory. But I like your translation, too.
That's one of the great things about poetry — you don't have to say things outright and it's okay if you translate things differently than what the author intended.
blank-unused chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
This happen to be quite true in my
JasmineRaven chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
I thought this poem was very interesting and well written. It told a story, which I thought was great.
Reading it, I could feel the character's loneliness and outcastedness (not a word but you get the point).

Well done :D Keep up the brilliant writing.