Reviews for Baby Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I loove tis! |
![]() ![]() Jesus, you scared the hell out of me. I was thinking, "No. There's no way the author's gonna do this to Leda". Good thing it all worked out in the end. I thought you would've told us the baby's name here, too. But, I guess we'll have to wait. Your details are great. Whenever I read something of yours, once I get into the flow of it, it feels like I'm watching events unfold rather than reading them. This one-shot is probably your most intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh that was awesome love the walking dead insert , I hope she calls the baby either daryl or dixon or i may be slightly disappointed XD awesome story though |
![]() ![]() Poor Matt lol. That must have been traumatizing. Wow. Very, um detailed, and you know, I'm not sure how much I would like to be in that position but it's probably good that it happened to Leda rather than anyone else. Someone else wouldn't have been able to handle it. Nicely done, as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An entertaining read, my only advice would to pay more attention to some of your sentences as you had a few misspellings and a skipped word or two. Overall good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If this kid's name isn't Pollux...Good story too :) |