|Reviews for Drabbles of the author's feelings|
| JasmineHoran chapter 2 . 1/15
Another great, short, emotional piece! Some parts that stood out to me was the phrase "cold, harsh reality would slap her in the face" and when you referred to the marks as "tallies." I really like the simplicity of your stories and how they still have deep emotions behind them.
Well done! :)
| JasmineHoran chapter 1 . 1/14
I'm a fan of short scenes on emotions, so I did enjoy reading this. I felt that, because there is no back story to the character, and you did not name her, we readers were able to focus entirely on her emotions, getting the full effect of the story.
One typo I picked up- "until she sure (should be saw) the dents in her wall". Apart from that, I couldn't find any other errors. I thought the story was absolutely brilliant! Let me know when you update. I really look forward to reading more of your emotion scenes. :D