This is really good! Did you get your idea from Childhood's End? The origin story is quite similar to Clarke's work.

Hahaha this story is too cute! If only there was a sequel! I been looking for a satisfying story for two full weeks and I finally found a great one.

I knew as soon as he started saying something about camera against stomach hahahahha! I feel bad for Jon though...I believe that freedom is power so I would've never been able to accommodate so easily.

To be honest I found this hard to read and a little disappointed because I was looking toward to the reaction of the main character and he just accepted it like it was nothing and I found this was the moment he would at least voice his views and shows his feelings but he just accept it when he should fight a little and I hate that honestly. I love threesome relationship but in this story I hate it and this my opinion so sorry I can't no longer this story.

Despite all the gut retching, wallowing in misery over the character situation and frequent swings between feeling homicidal and suicidal that the story instilled in me. I was surprised when I fell in love with the characters again when Jon got pregnant and they became an exclusive family unit. The exclusivity is what I wanted for him all along. I just don't see why the aliens can't work toward achieving these units from the get go as a posed to tossing the poor humans around. My brain just can't seem to properly integrate these things. I apologies for ranting again.

I would ask what the penalty was for trying to kill him. If it wasn't death my first priority would be suicide if not provoking him to beat me to death. I just don't have it in me to be a sex slave in any submissive capacity. It would have to be violent or I'd have to be drugged out of my head. My spirit is just too much that of a fighter. Sorry for the rant. Your writing is good just not my cup of tea.

Omg! Haven't even read it yet and I'm uber excited! Thankyou!