Reviews for Rise
jason.previlon chapter 33 . 4/17/2014
Eww, you sly author. You droped a sly sex joked and I didn't even pick up on it.
jason.previlon chapter 14 . 4/16/2014
I'm so glad someone put Devidrius in his place, go Nikeyin. This story line makes me want to join the military.
jason.previlon chapter 11 . 4/16/2014
I'm loving this story line. I sorta want to fan fiction it, but that only out of love and respect of the well written plot. Is there a connection between how advance a civilization is and their chaotic potential? And i'm totally looking forward to the new chaotics that are sure to come.
jason.previlon chapter 9 . 4/16/2014
I'm loving the series so far. I like the data facts with every chapter. Keep up the good work. Oh and I can't wait to see a telekinetic chaotic.