Reviews for Synergy
Devon Pitlor chapter 1 . 1/17
Very mystical and intruiguing. I liked the detached theme and the sense of strange but familiar ambiguity. This is very good:

"It sprung from a nerve,
an inward stir"

As is the rythm and the rest of the obscure image. Synergy is a very hard theme to develop, but you do it well. Nice poem. Nice mystery.