Reviews for The Nightmare King
musicboxmetaphor chapter 23 . 6/25/2016
What was up with that Hans Solo response, Alexander? ;) haha jk I loved this.

It's hard to give you a serious comment when this ending just has me beyond giddy. It truly left me with that feeling of their story moving forward, while still giving *this* story the perfect resolution. I also love what you did with making Alexander human (well, mostly). I've also been really uncomfortable with the way women are owned and changed in paranormal stories, and this did a great job of flipping that trope. These two are true partners, and I love that.

Thank you for the beautiful story! I'm so glad to have followed you along the for the ride 3 ~Mia
musicboxmetaphor chapter 22 . 6/25/2016
This was a roller coaster of a chapter. A nightmare of a chapter. Beautifully executed. Left me feeling full and hollow at the same time 3
musicboxmetaphor chapter 21 . 6/25/2016
Mother of Morpheus. Seriously Violet just takes the words to define each of these chapters right out of my mouth. Way to make us soar to heights of nightmarish love then... this brutal chapter! If I hadn't read ahead before commenting here I. would. be. breaking my caps lock key T-T
musicboxmetaphor chapter 20 . 6/25/2016
This chapter was... unsurprisingly shattering, but also like a word:
FINALLY!

Don't get me wrong, I've been reading along, just failing at hopping on to comment on your progress, so now I'm trekking back to catch up.

And this chapter... just... gah! To finally read an open conversation between these two about their doomed, fated, brilliant love was just... FINALLY!

And then for Violet to whip out her classic genius. This duo's collaboration is just A-plus.

Literally there are just so many moments in this chapter that I wanted to quote, circle, hold, squeeze, dreammm that I could hardly contain myself.
JusticeRecieved chapter 23 . 6/6/2016
I feel like I've been coming back to this story forever, but I only found it last fall. I also feel like I've explained the concept of this story to everyone I know. So many instances have occurred where this story paralleled something in my life (e.g. Violet and Alexander's bond, wanting to create something from nothing). Reading this also led me to looking up the author, and reading her blog. She is so insightful and inspiring, and I look forward to reading her published work one day; as I am sure that day will come. This story has been so rich and so unexpectedly captivating, and it has carved its own place into my heart. Thank you for all of it.
Ash chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
This is amazing!
always145kh chapter 23 . 5/29/2016
There has to be a way for Alexander to become a nightmare again! There has to! This is killing me! Oh my god! It's so bittersweet! Okay. It's like 1:52 in the morning. I really hope Alexander becomes nightmare again. WE ARE THE A-L, E-X, A-N-D, E-R, WE ARE MEANT TO BE! Sorry, Alexander Hamilton obsession. I was just getting over it when I stumbled upon wonderful Alexander Ira here. G'night! Sorry if this review makes no sense, its late... or early. Bye! I have an appointment with a wonderful Alexander in my dreams. XOX
~Katheryn
MileyRowling chapter 23 . 5/25/2016
Nice job!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/24/2016
Wow. I didn't see that coming next. I love your writing, this was very unique and I'm so glad you finished this story
ChimericalWrites chapter 23 . 5/24/2016
I remember when I first found the previous draft of Once Upon a Nightmare on Fictionpress, and wouldn't shut up about it to any of my friends. And whenever the newer draft and sequel was posted they again had to hear me go on and on. I have been in love with this story and its characters since the beginning and I'm really happy with how it all turned out. The idea of the strange gap between the human and supernatural love interest has always bothered me in how it was handled in most books, and it was really cool to see it differently here. Especially Alex realizing what he was going to sacrifice and actually looking at the options to decide that what he wanted was to be with Violet. I'm ridiculously rambling but thank you for the wonderful stories. It always made my day to get online and see a new chapter alert in my inbox :)
bridgettblah chapter 23 . 5/24/2016
This was perfect? Like seriously. 10/10. By far this is ooan are among my top favs ever. I know years from now Ill still find myself thinking of Violet when I go into a small bookshop and nightmares arent so awful to wake up from when I can pretend I know the Nightmare causing it.
I forgot where I was going with this. Ummm...
WELL ANYWAYS. 10/10 YES. THIS WAS WONDERFUL. I AM SATISFIED.
THANK YOU.
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 23 . 5/24/2016
Ah, a happy ending for this chapter! Two updates in one week?! I like it!
MileyRowling chapter 22 . 5/23/2016
Nice work!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 22 . 5/20/2016
Great update! Looking forward to more!
Anne chapter 22 . 5/19/2016
*squeal of pleasure* Love this new chapter. I was hoping Alexander would become mortal! I love the section about the magic of a kiss-it really makes this feel like a fairytale. And the relationship between fear and love...that's been central to this story, I think, and I think that talking about their power in this moment is great...even if the image in my mind's eye of Violet kissing Kai's braindead body is weird, haha. And, now that Alexander's mortal, there is so much to think about in terms of the transition between Nightmare to human. I mean...what exactly is he, now? Is he going to adapt to normal human life? Does he still need fear to survive like he did as a Nightmare, or can he just get by with human food now? If he went back to Chimera for a visit, would he look like did before he became mortal? I have zillions of questions. I know this book is almost over, but I would say that there is still material to work with here for a third installation. Just saying. ;)

Wonderful job! :D Looking forward to the end.
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