|Reviews for you right wrongs, i write wrongs|
| MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
O.o I like the title...
Whoa. I like it all.
That's all I have to say for now.
| Night Skye Tears chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
"drown myself in words, fill my lungs with beginnings as i try to live through an ending" - amazing line.
| Soetopo chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
your poems really inspire me to write again. You're creative, you really are.
don't stop writing.
| smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
I can't quite place my finger on it, but there's something about this that's alluring.
| tolerate chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Your title really pulled me in. I loved the cleverness of it. I also liked the positioning of your poem, the lack of capitalization fitting the theme of it, and the lines [you, you'll be immortal]. It had a lyrical feeling to it, like as though a song and a fact. I also loved the line [fill my lungs with beginnings as i try to live through an ending]. The rhythm, the contrast of beginnings and endings, was lifted in that very moment and as you continue on with the next line, it felt to me it was the chorus of the song where it goes high and full of strong emotions—the singer's voice reaching the peak—and from there it goes down to a gradual slowness and calmness. I like the buildup and the release. This is a beautiful poem.