Reviews for cotton candy and a child's sweet tooth
Night Skye Tears chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
love it, great imagery.
winner's destination chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Fabulous poem, love the title and the way it ends
Distance Navigator chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
That's a very deep poem. If you elaborate on some points, then it would enhance the surprise.
Soetopo chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
The title caught my attention, and the poem wasn't so bad.

but at the last line I felt something off. (nope, not the unfinished one, it's on purpose right that you left it unfinished?)