Reviews for impure
SustineoAlas chapter 1 . 1/23
I may disagree with some of the opinions, but I love the poem. It's written really well, and you see the girl's desire to be something more than her mother, but she doesn't know how to do that aside from throwing off the strictures and rules she has always been taught. I hope, whoever the girl is, she ends up happy. Maybe you could make more poems from her point of view?
Nihlo chapter 1 . 1/20
First of all, this needs to be rated something a little stronger. T or M please, preferably M. Secondly, ew. Thirdly, God doesn't mean no freedom! I'm sorry but this poem just sickens me.