Reviews for The Internal Struggle of Stacey-Jo Dawson
julianmarq chapter 15 . 9/15/2023
Four years later and I just had to reread this story as several things happening right now reminded me of it.

Still not a fan of Stacey-Jo's comment about who was at fault regarding the cheating, but I actually like that she isn't perfect.
julianmarq chapter 14 . 7/1/2019
I was re-reading this story because I was reading all of my bookmarks and this chapter reminded me why I stopped reviewing eventually.

"And I refuse to call Mason an innocent party in all this. I mean, he's definitely the most innocent party, but he's not entirely innocent."

This part. Stacey became a thoroughly unlikable asshole the moment she said that. She became an enabler of abuse and a victim blamer. Sad, she was a jerk before this, yes, but one with scruples.
kktalk123katherine chapter 19 . 11/21/2017
Why oh why haven't you give me any more of one of my favorite couples and book ever? I know this is a shot in the dark since you haven't updated in forever but please continue written on this. Even if you don't my opinion of this won't change (it's beautiful and brilliant) but I would love for some more.
cha2010chi chapter 18 . 12/7/2016
I can't believe it's been 2014 since this last post and still keep hoping for an update. Damn good story and love the character development
Blublublub chapter 19 . 9/24/2016
Read this story for the first time a couple of years ago and randomly had the urge to reread it today. After some intense binge-reading, my eyes are tired and slightly burning, but I'm filled with the same warm, gooey feeling I had when I first stumbled across your fic. So I thought I'd thank you for the experience haha. And I know it's a long shot, since its been 2 years since you updated it, but I'd absolutely love it if you updated and finished this story. It'd be a shame to leave it unfinished! But regardless, this remains one of my favourite fics on this website :)
Molly Raesly chapter 19 . 8/10/2015
I love this story. Please come back to it!
Guest chapter 19 . 7/30/2015
Duuuuude pleeeeeeease updaaaaaaate
julianmarq chapter 10 . 7/1/2015
This could be made into a movie.
julianmarq chapter 8 . 7/1/2015
I think the chapter flowed well enough.
And I take back the review from the previous chapter. The banter between Stacey-Jo, GiGi and Austin was great. It's the first time I've liked a scene of Stacey-Jo and her friends as much as I've liked most of her scenes with Dallas.
julianmarq chapter 7 . 7/1/2015
I don't find your dialogue awkward. It's sharp and to the point.

This entire chapter feels earned, almost a culmination. And it's only the seventh, it's a testament at how well you write.
I do have find out that your story seems to come more alive when you're writing Dallas. Stacey's friends tend to blend in the background and even she becomes a little less distinct when you write her with them.
julianmarq chapter 6 . 7/1/2015
It's interesting, it builds Stacey's character knowing about her past.
julianmarq chapter 4 . 7/1/2015
Their relationship develops at a nice pace. Awesome.
julianmarq chapter 3 . 7/1/2015
I don't even care about sports and you managed to make more excited with words than by actually watching it.
That's skill.
julianmarq chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Just the first chapters and the characters already feel like they have personalities. Nicely done.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/8/2015
I absolutely love your story! The characters are truly great, and the development between SJ and Dallas is so awesome to "watch". do you think you'll be continuing this story? You can count me among those who anxiously await your next update.
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