Reviews for The Internal Struggle of Stacey-Jo Dawson
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
Great work! Keep it up
kairi chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
Love Dallas! Love. Urg.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
Usually, romances will have the guy and girl dislike each other and then some other element keeping them apart. Other than the serious-but-not-really Copperheads-Texans rivalry, Dallas and Stacey-Jo like each other so I'm curious where you go with this...
kairi chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
The Patriots won! Haha but Dallas played well. Its nice that you font give him a sweeping victory and I think he would have improved whether he net SJ or not. SJs friend group sounds interesting. I like GiGi and Topher the most. Danielle and Mason are cute but highlighter girl is the best.
EHN chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Well, as a football fan, I understand all the lingo...
EHN chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
Dallas has this incredible ability to be both charming and assholish all at the sane time. Love!
EHN chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
I love football and I love romance and I love this.
kairi chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
I love the banter between Dallas and Stacey-Jo. She doesn't take none of his shit. Haha I love his exasperated explanation of a one night stand. Update soon!
Queen-Knightess chapter 2 . 1/21/2014

You've created a spunky, smart-mouthing, 'no-filter' kind of girl, and it's very entertaining to read the dialogue between Stacey-Jo and Dallas. You made me laugh several times, and I really enjoyed the fact that SJ criticizes Dallas at most turns.

What you might want to remember about characters is that you want to make them REAL. Which means there will be inconsistency within them! ( Not too much, but you should get my point) :) No character should always be nice. No character should always be bad. No character should always be smooth or sauve. We all have had 'out-of-character' moments, haven't we? So don't worry about making characters inconsistent ( to a degree, ya know?). :)

And yes, Dallas is most definitely hot. I love athletic boys! And I most definitely enjoy reading a football story! Or any sports story for that matter! Keep up the fabulous work!

May you make more witty-comebacks by SJ that make me laugh, ( Pretty please!) ;)

kairi chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Stacey-Jo Dawson is damn spunky and I love her. I'm a football fan (go pats) so I appreciate all the football talk. I cringe for Dallas starting a 0-2 rookie season. Also, can Dallas play the Dallas Cowboys? Because you know how fantastic that would be. Update soon!
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