|Reviews for The Internal Struggle of Stacey-Jo Dawson|
| Sadie chapter 16 . 9/9/2014
Just finished reading through your story for a second time, and realised just how much I like Gigi and Dallas' friends (specially Ajay). So good :-)
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 16 . 9/9/2014
Well that almost seemed like making love... almost ;)
Anyway, great story! I'm really enjoying learning all about football. Everything that comes out of her mouth makes me laugh. Especially the innuendos both of them make :)
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 12 . 9/9/2014
I'm only up to chapter twelve but I feel obliged to tell you that I'm really enjoying this story (although all the 'I'm not IN love with you' stuff is depressing me) haha :)
I'm really not into sports... especially not football. I'm more of a sleeping/eating/reading girl myself ;) But I can appreciate a story that involves sport from time to time! :D
| gracefish21 chapter 16 . 9/9/2014
| Wa-hoo chapter 16 . 9/8/2014
you go cowgirl, that was better than the first time around :)
| elbbubniaevili chapter 16 . 9/8/2014
Great Chapter. I like how in this revision, they're realizing their feelings a lot sooner. Also loving all they football! My team (the Ravens) had a very disappointing loss in the first game of the season. I blame our receivers, Smith Sr alone dropped 5 passes, and now this scandal with firing Ray Rice (while deserved it the publicity takes away from the football). Hopefully will be able to do better this Thursday. How are your teams doing?
| Asterisk Blue chapter 16 . 9/8/2014
Mmm. Emotional progress!
| Tippy Shortstockings chapter 15 . 9/8/2014
I'm not over it yet either! The Packers have been my team since they avenged my beloved Cardinals the year after our super bowl loss.
| Asterisk Blue chapter 15 . 9/7/2014
Uh-oh. I remember the Halloween chapter...
| Texans Fan chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
I honestly clicked on this story because I'm a Texans fan and my loyalty is strong but I love this after only the first chapter. It's great!
| We Could Be Heroes chapter 15 . 9/7/2014
I loved this chapter so much! It was so relaxed and easy to read, which helps to break it up a little bit. I love how stories just, like, ebb and flow almost.
I also wanted to mention how much I love that you give tall girls some love. I read so many stories, especially within the romance genre, where tall girls are mainly typecast as being psycho exes or mean spirited people complicating relationships. It's quite refreshing, really.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/7/2014
Your story is lovely and so wonderfully written. I love how it stays true to itself and basically doesn't try to be something it's not. The dialogue, while witty, lovely, sincere and sombre, is very true to what you'd expect of people that age with those interests. I'm not saying your story is predictable at all; it's not. I think, while clearly a love story, the football slant gives it an edge that maybe other stories don't have. P.s. Love how you update so quickly, even though I still check my inbox incessantly. P.p.s Go Seahawks!
| gracefish21 chapter 15 . 9/6/2014
| Jester79 chapter 15 . 9/6/2014
Great chapter. I like their talks and that they've shared a few things. The kids a twerp. I have to say on a side note that while I'm sorry for your loss, the Seahawks did my fantasy football team proud. Lynch and Cobb and the defense, nice.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/6/2014
Such a cute chapter! And suck it packers, go Seahawks!