Reviews for The Internal Struggle of Stacey-Jo Dawson
taradactyl chapter 27 . 6/22/2014
YOOOU my dear lady(or man) need to update. This story is really good and the characters are developed just enough to keep the story interesting. I'm not sure why I started reading this considering I hate sports with a passion, but I'm glad I did. One of the best stories I've read in a while on fictionpress. I'm looking forward to more. PLEASE UPDATE
Jed Linx chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
PLEASEEEEEE update this story! Im so so sad that I dont know what happens!
aacanna24 chapter 26 . 6/15/2014
It's been a month and a half, and like the addict I am, I've reread this a good 3 or 4 times! I really hope you haven't given up on this one, or maybe you've got a really bad writers block? Hope it all works out and update soon!
N chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Please update. This is my favourite story, and I am really hoping you will carry it on. :)
Tramaka chapter 27 . 6/6/2014
Please update soon! I'm going through Dallie and SJ withdrawal!
Guest chapter 27 . 5/29/2014
Please please keep writing this story! Can't wait for next chapter! This is the best story I've read so far on this site. And believe me I love to read.
renegade01 chapter 27 . 5/10/2014
Awesome story ;-) I'm not really all that into sports but you make it exciting
Boris the Puppet chapter 27 . 5/7/2014
Oh. My. Goodness! I love this story! I can't stop reading it, and I'm crazily looking forward to more! I think about it all the time...which sounds kinda creepy, but true nonetheless! I love how addicting it is to read, how funny and enjoyable, even the football parts...I've learned more about football than anyone could teach me (mostly because I wasn't listening). But I must read more! I love SJ and Dallie, they make me swoon and squeal like a crazy girl (who reads too much romance to be healthy). I look forward to more!
Nachiketa chapter 27 . 5/4/2014
I just love your writing style. Epic chapter. And THANK YOU for the more detailed "fluff" of "lemon" in previous chapter.
Guest chapter 27 . 5/3/2014
Watermellow chapter 27 . 5/1/2014
Dallas. With a traumatic past. It's beautiful.
Tippy Shortstockings chapter 27 . 5/1/2014
I loved this chapter. I think it was completely in sync with what we already knew about Dallas and his father. And it was completely eye opening when it comes to why the Kiers have such a strained relationship.
cha2010chi chapter 27 . 4/30/2014
I cant get enough of this story, I hope you update soon
jmeec316 chapter 27 . 4/29/2014
Well, that was an interesting window into Dally's relationship with his dad. Loved it. Good luck with the assignment.
alchem chapter 27 . 4/29/2014
I enjoyed the piece. It is a revelation to the novel. As a stand alone piece it is very good as well. I think it could be more impactful if you edit out Shawn and some of Glen. If you just focus on the father-son relationship it illustrates how much of the father's character the son inherits. Maybe even though the football rivalry is the punch line... It could give a shadow of the missing mother.

It might be too much commentary for the week, I think it is important for short stories to show character development and give the reader a an insight into the human condition.

Thank you for writing and sharing. I hope you find my words helpful and continue to write. You have talent for dialogue.
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