Reviews for I Will Wait For You
Lilliandil chapter 6 . 2/28/2014
Hmm...nice! Could be a bit more descriptive though, and a bit longer. However, I love the way you've zoomed in on the character's feelings. It gets me emotionally attached to the story. Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Lilliandil chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
That's write, not right. This chapter is quite good, but maybe describe the scenery and looks and stuff a bit more and try not to focus on the emotions so much. :)
Lilliandil chapter 3 . 1/28/2014
Very nice. Love the family touch
Lilliandil chapter 2 . 1/28/2014
Nice! Love the descriptions. Maybe a bit more action would make it a bit more interesting.
Lilliandil chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Not bad for a beginner! :)
Lilliandil chapter 4 . 1/22/2014 cute! Totally love it!