Reviews for The Goblin Child
Elf from Downunder chapter 19 . 4/1
*claps excitedly* Yay! Forest is back! I know he's older now, but I still find him a very cute and well-written character. :)
The small(?) rivalry between Oliver and Sam is intense and rather heated - I'm eager to read how the plot goes with their arguing.
Haha, and I'm so glad Kristoff will still be there! :D
Elf from Downunder chapter 17 . 3/18
My, I have to know what happens next! I'm excited to know what will happen with Oliver, and hopefully Carson will be okay. :) While also wondering if we'll see Kristoff again, it was actually a bit of a surprise for Orion to come back - things are darkening! And I really like your description of the Fears. ;)
Elf from Downunder chapter 16 . 3/16
Sorry for this terribly late review! :P Like all your previous chapters, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I'm eager to read what's going to happen next - quite a cliffhanger! ;) I think you already know this, but I love Kristoff ... and Oliver and Carson are just ... 3 ;D
Elf from Downunder chapter 15 . 3/3
Oh my gosh, this was all so cute! :) I love how Kristoff so casually makes fun of Oliver now, and his lightheartedness towards him despite their little fight before. ;) Aw, Oliver and Carson! :D
Elf from Downunder chapter 14 . 3/2
Aw. It was such a nice thing of Carson to offer him a way out of it - in her own way, insulting him no less! ;)
With how you ended it, it's exciting thinking of how you'll end up writing the next bits! :)
Elf from Downunder chapter 13 . 2/24
It's interesting reading how Kristoff and Oliver are getting along while informing what's going on at the same time. ;) His description of Fears has myself rather frightened, and wondering however will Oliver face them during the story? :)
Elf from Downunder chapter 12 . 2/23
I'm so happy that Carson's back! I'm enjoying her friendship with Oliver, and the introduction of the Scroll has brought so much tension and fear onto certain characters. :) It's so interesting the direction you're taking this story! I'm so excited. :D
Elf from Downunder chapter 11 . 2/16
Kristoff is such a delight to read - I wonder if Oliver and him will form some sort of friendship along the way? ;) I'm curious as to whether or not Carson and Forest will be mentioned again, and loving all the new ideas and the path this story is now taking! :D
CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 11 . 2/14
Oh my god great chapter I love all the new ideas and characters I'm wondering where this place is and if forest and Carson are alright but great chapter!
CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 10 . 2/13
WOW really great twist I love how he sees Lester again and anyways I'm so glad he's alive and GREAT chapter :D
Elf from Downunder chapter 10 . 2/12
Such a twist you've woven here! I was not expecting that at the end! ;) I really liked reading Oliver's brief meeting with Lester again; I'm glad Oliver's alright, and with the way you left things off, I'm eager to read how you'll continue! :D
CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 9 . 2/9
Oh my god this was wonderful but please tell me Oliver/Macon isn't dead and he escapes and oh god ok I'm dying anyways greatttttt chapter
CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 8 . 2/9
Oh my god sorry for not reviewing I've been really busy!

Anyways great chapter I love how forest teases them and all and I'm really worried about what Oliver/Macon will do
Elf from Downunder chapter 8 . 2/8
I wonder how things will turn out now - Argh! And Oliver! So ... much ... feels by the end of this! ;) Forest and Carson were wonderfully written, and Oliver's roll has me tensed up; I hope he'll be alright!
Great chapter! :)
Elf from Downunder chapter 7 . 2/5
These were some intense chapters! ;) As always, I love Carson; I'm hoping she'll be okay, since I love the friendship between her and Oliver. Aw, Forester was such a cute addition, and it's sad yet heart warming reading his hopes. I'm hoping he stays with Oliver ... ;) Speaking of Oliver, this last chapter has me worried for him!
Thanks for the updates, and sorry for taking a while to review! :)
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