|Reviews for The Goblin Child|
| Elf from Downunder chapter 15 . 3/3
Oh my gosh, this was all so cute! :) I love how Kristoff so casually makes fun of Oliver now, and his lightheartedness towards him despite their little fight before. ;) Aw, Oliver and Carson! :D
| Elf from Downunder chapter 14 . 3/2
Aw. It was such a nice thing of Carson to offer him a way out of it - in her own way, insulting him no less! ;)
With how you ended it, it's exciting thinking of how you'll end up writing the next bits! :)
| Elf from Downunder chapter 13 . 2/24
It's interesting reading how Kristoff and Oliver are getting along while informing what's going on at the same time. ;) His description of Fears has myself rather frightened, and wondering however will Oliver face them during the story? :)
| Elf from Downunder chapter 12 . 2/23
I'm so happy that Carson's back! I'm enjoying her friendship with Oliver, and the introduction of the Scroll has brought so much tension and fear onto certain characters. :) It's so interesting the direction you're taking this story! I'm so excited. :D
| Elf from Downunder chapter 11 . 2/16
Kristoff is such a delight to read - I wonder if Oliver and him will form some sort of friendship along the way? ;) I'm curious as to whether or not Carson and Forest will be mentioned again, and loving all the new ideas and the path this story is now taking! :D
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 11 . 2/14
Oh my god great chapter I love all the new ideas and characters I'm wondering where this place is and if forest and Carson are alright but great chapter!
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 10 . 2/13
WOW really great twist I love how he sees Lester again and anyways I'm so glad he's alive and GREAT chapter :D
| Elf from Downunder chapter 10 . 2/12
Such a twist you've woven here! I was not expecting that at the end! ;) I really liked reading Oliver's brief meeting with Lester again; I'm glad Oliver's alright, and with the way you left things off, I'm eager to read how you'll continue! :D
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 9 . 2/9
Oh my god this was wonderful but please tell me Oliver/Macon isn't dead and he escapes and oh god ok I'm dying anyways greatttttt chapter
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 8 . 2/9
Oh my god sorry for not reviewing I've been really busy!
Anyways great chapter I love how forest teases them and all and I'm really worried about what Oliver/Macon will do
| Elf from Downunder chapter 8 . 2/8
I wonder how things will turn out now - Argh! And Oliver! So ... much ... feels by the end of this! ;) Forest and Carson were wonderfully written, and Oliver's roll has me tensed up; I hope he'll be alright!
Great chapter! :)
| Elf from Downunder chapter 7 . 2/5
These were some intense chapters! ;) As always, I love Carson; I'm hoping she'll be okay, since I love the friendship between her and Oliver. Aw, Forester was such a cute addition, and it's sad yet heart warming reading his hopes. I'm hoping he stays with Oliver ... ;) Speaking of Oliver, this last chapter has me worried for him!
Thanks for the updates, and sorry for taking a while to review! :)
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 7 . 2/4
Oh my god great update!
I had my throat all tight for this chapter I kinda suspected they would do that at the beginning of the chapter abuse Carson them give Oliver or Macon her so he'll feel bad... Anyways I like forest a lot ... But so they're gonna remove his magic? Even though it could make him go insane and hurt a lot and everything but will they then leave him alone because he's of no problem to them without his magic? So that's kinda good... Anyways please have Carson wake up sometime
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 6 . 2/4
Oh my god I hope Carson is alright.. Please tell me she's not dead... Oh god that's all I can think about...
| CelesteIzaFanLolz chapter 5 . 2/3
Carson oh god I really hope her fathers alive? Maybe they'll have a father-daughter reunion later? That would be nice :D
Anyways great chapter and I love your writing and god your characters are awesome! To put it bluntly- I'm mocking Carson there ;P or maybe not mocking kinda quoting but not word of word but whatever let's not get into the technicalities
Anyways great chapter!