|Reviews for Ink|
| Lily Miichelle123 chapter 4 . 5/4/2014
| Kirito8550 chapter 5 . 3/3/2014
Hey in like to bets your story I love the way you write you had my full attention through the whole thing if you want me to beta my email is I would love to beta your story its so good
| Lily Miichelle123 chapter 3 . 2/24/2014
Awesome CHAPTERS SO FAR! C: Keep Writing more please(:
| Lily Miichelle123 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Wonderful job on this first chapter! I love it so far! XD
| Kisaragi Rune chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
Sorry it took me this long to review, I wasn't really in a mood to read .
The flow is still great, the scenes just go so perfectly *-*
I'm quite happy Jin didn't kill that guy. (Have I ever mentioned that I love that name?) I want to know more about Jin's power... The next chapter should be interesting... I also want to know more about this Dimitri guy. I feel like Jin's screwed in his hand... Which is not a bad thing at all. xD
You made a few mistakes in punctuation, but nothing serious. I would say, however, sometimes it annoy the reader. X.X I've seen worse, though. Also, in one line, you changed between first to third person. But everyone makes mistakes like that :v if I can suggest something, get a friend to proofread it before posting. It's easier for other people to catch mistakes and correct them
Overall, this is still great! keep the good work!
| Kisaragi Rune chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Wow. Just, wow. Really a great story here O
That cliffhanger at the end . It's cruel, you know? I didn't expected it, really.
Although there isn't much to say about the character right now, I see great pontential to develop them from how you write them.
But your writing style is just beautiful, really. Every break, every scene just flow in the text.
I'm just sad there isn't more, I want to know what happens next!
Seriously though, this needs more reviews '-'