Reviews for Maybe Too Late |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am reading most of your stories now. They are nicely put. One thing that disturbs is most of them have some kind of sadness covered. The female lead characters in all the stories seems to please and care about all around them instead of following her own heart. Why it feels so? |
![]() ![]() The last sentence is gold, this is true that their relationship maybe wouldn't have worked out, maybe it's just the coincidental meeting that makes us smile. It would have been great though if they confessed to each other that they liked each other in the past and part ways, or not since that would have left me wanting for more. |
![]() ![]() Okay so my initial reaction , the minute I finished is WTFF I wanted to read a sappy cliche and eww hate this. But then I realised I probably feel this way because ugh I relate to stories like this and it makes me all sad and nostalgic and gives rise to all these bittersweet memories. And I don't want to relate T_T. There was this guy I really liked and something could have happened and it didn't and I'm still not over it \3. Anyway great story, no grammatical errors thank god. Im glad I read it even if I wish I'd been warned I was about to be taking a feels trip |
![]() ![]() ![]() that hurt so bad ...cant help people being idiot haha |
![]() ![]() Finally, a story almost similar to my (maybe others too) reality. |
![]() ![]() Damn you really know how to tell a love story... i was most definitely not expecting that.. great story! |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. It left me wondering about a few things like why was Iola upset that day at school? I agree not all stories are fairy tales. |
![]() ![]() I normally do not like stories where the main couple doesn't get together in the end because I'm a hopeless romantic and what's the point if they don't get together, right? But then I really, really liked this one! It was so realistic, it flowed really naturally, and I loved that the perspective switched between the two. Also, the ending was just really nice and heartwarming, albeit bittersweet. Nice job! xx |
![]() ![]() What!? NO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad but a realistic ending. At least they still interacted and met throughout the years instead of a distant longing type of thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nuuuuuuuu this is one of your stories that I DO want a happy ever after! Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu but I rather like the ending, actually. It's open and it could go either way. And I agree that they were both too immature, too invested in what others (their friends) thought of them to have been in a lasting relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this made me cry, so sad ;-(:-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story! It was sweet and just a touch bittersweet, like first loves, or "what-ifs" are. I found this on the "Best Romance Read of FictionPress" and I'm so glad I did - I'll be sure to check out some of your other works! Keep it up! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! It has been added to my community. Keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooo...I was hoping for a happy ending up until the very last line. Sigh...this is so bittersweet. I'm just going to imagine a happy ending for myself. :) I really did enjoy reading it though. I would be REALLY REALLY REALLY happy if you ever decided that you wanted to extend it and have a happy ending...you know just a thought :) |