Reviews for And Then There's Those Other Things
Cheddar-Graham chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
I'm not a smoker, never was one or ever plan to be one, but you know what, I understand the feeling you're trying to get across, because there are other things than one can crave. I think you have the grouchy exactly right, and I can see how that would make Melvin nastier than he actually is. Lucky guy, to have not just one but TWO guys taking care of him!
PET chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
I'm glad I found another story worth being favorited.
You could use some proofreading btw.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
fun
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
"So long, suckers!"
Melvin is Purfect. Though the second part of the story was a little far-fetched, it was still very funny. I enjoyed the beginning most, with Brian being a cocky bastard (dang, Brian is awesome. I think he's my favourite) and the barista being pissed and concerned from a distance. Your characters are TOO interesting! You really have a knack for this, classy writing, love it. Especially the swearing, which totally came at the right moment. Also, let me marry Brian, okay? He's like an 'evil mastermind' Tom. I thoroughly enjoyed that part where Melvin describes his 'devious, dastardly and conniving' ways. Hilarious.
InsanityAndBeyond chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
loved this.
great one-shot :)