Wha- I hadn't reviewed this before? D: Well now I have :D
I love the twins and the plot so far. I especially like how their relationship seems more closer than the siblings I know in rl (my sister and I included XD)
Congratulations on winning the contest!

-Sunny

Okay, first, BEST BROTHER SISTER RELATIONSHIP EVER! I love Owen, he's got a temper on him, but, he's just the sweetest thing. And Mary, she's so much like her brother, but, at the same time, her own person, and vice versa with Owen. I'm glad that Owen and Mary patched things up, and I'm happy the Tom and Eliza did as well. Heh, I wish good luck to Tom, marriage ain't easy. And from what Mary said, I think he'll get off to a rocky start, but, he'll figure it out in do time. I absolutely love, love, love! This book! When I saw that I was on chapter nine, I said to myself, that's all? Aw man! I want to read more of this soooooo badly! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.

Awww, yes. Owen has earned back his awesomeness, along with me laughing at the usage of 'sweets' for an AMERICAN. C'mon, write American style if you're writing about us. xD

Well, the voting will start soon so be prepared!

Cheers,
Gone

Lol, the drama! Now Owen's becoming a liar and Mary is getting /really/ mad at him. Typical sibling fights. :D

Update soon!

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Gone

Is this normal boy logic or something? xD IT'S NOT HER FAULT. *smacks some sense into Owen*

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Gone

Hehehe. I like Joe and Mary's friendship, or will it be MORE than friendship? Mwahaha. *coughs weirdly* Okay, ignore me.

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Gone

*sighs* Dear lord, Owen, YOU ATTACKED FIRST. YOU IDIOT. *facepalm* I decided I prefer Mary right now, because Owen is being quite an idiot.

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Gone

Lol, I like Joe a lot, but of course Owen decides to play the overprotective idiot. I guess I'll see how that goes after I read the next chapter!

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Gone

This is a pretty good story. I like the fact that there is a different author writing for each character. It really shows, and it makes the characters' personalities noticeably different, which is definitely a good thing. I like that Owen is flawed in the fact that he has anger management issues and how he can't see that the fight with Joe really was his fault and not Joe's. I'll be interested to see what further trouble he gets into by trying to be cool and loosing his temper like he does. I'm also anxious to see how Mary's relationship with Joe develops.

The only problem I noticed is that the characters live in Illinois but there are a lot of "Britishisms" in the story. Maybe I missed something in the first chapter that alluded to them being from England. I can't remember. If they are supposed to be from England, then I apologize for bringing this up. If they are supposed to be American, then I would suggest not using British-type phrases and words. For example, Americans do not typically say, "Oi!" or "We get on" or "Maths" or "cheeky." More appropriate Americanisms would be "Hey!" or "Yo!", "We get along," "Math/Algebra/Geometry," and "smart" instead of "cheeky."

In any case, good story. Good luck with it. I'll be waiting for an update.

Another awesome chapter! Owen is already trying to fit in by acting cool (which is very realistic) and I have a feeling Mary is going to do the same thing with the new people she meets. I'm also guessing there's going to be a ton of arguments. XD

There were a few sentences I would have changed, but I think it was written well. The plot is realistic and so are the characters. Update soon. :)

Cheers,
Gone

I really liked this so far! You guys nailed the sibling part, because Owen and Mary act just like siblings would. I already like them both a lot, and I can't really tell who I prefer over the other. Anyway, it seemed like there were no errors in capitalization, spelling, punctuation, and grammar (although I can't tell with that very well, since that's my weakness).

I can't wait for the next chapter! You guys are off to a good start.

Cheers,
Gone