Reviews for Plight of the Peacock
MissPotterhead77 chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Great story! Very imaginative and creative. Narrator idea reminds me of The Book Thief. Mankind and Death. Both good perspectives to craft a story from.
Zen Jukebox chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
I really enjoyed reading this story with its great descriptive writing! We see commercials, signs, and people all over proclaiming globl warming and telling us to change. But unfortunately no one really makes a huge change in their life style because of these warnings. Maybe the recylce a bit more, or take a minute off of their shower time, but no huge change. This story has had more of an effect on me than all of those warnings combined! The sybolism is thick with rich meanings, and the frankness of your writing about how greedy we are is good. Most people are to afraid to openly poo-poo our lifestyles. So thank you and I hope you write more stories. Write well and God Bless!