Reviews for Dead Games
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
This would've been so much better if you spaced the initial paragraph a bit more... I mean the plot, while it's been used before, sounds amusing. So I personally recommend you space it out a lot more, so readers don'0t get intimidated by the word sea. As for now, I'll keep reading for the sake of it (also why the heck not?),
DragonBoss chapter 9 . 2/19/2014
Very good story; reminds me of Deadman Wonderland. Update soon!
Leigh Aldridge chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
RANDOM DRAMATIC CAPS LOCKS at the end there, I like it. I'm relieved it really was a virtual test. I'm sure you're going for crazy and unrealistic, but I don't think any rational government would pay tax money to teach criminals how to drive race cars :P
Leigh Aldridge chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
Ah, amnesia. That sucks. A kid named Error too. Neat. That woman with the D size breasts reminds me of Makina! Just sayin' the manga ver of DW is far superior to the anime. I'm not much for gore but the story between Ganta and Shiro was just too good. You can reply my review by PM it might be easier than reviewing ya own story :)
Jason Unknown chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
I got this idea from me and my friend making a goofy anime idea. It was originally so stupid and it had things like tricycle chainsaws and stuff. It was so dumb. Everyone, including the audience, died because we just kill all who go there. They wanted to die too, that's why they went there. After watching Deadman Wonderland and reading AKUMA NO GAKKOU by SUPAHKJUMP, I got the idea, what if there was a prison designed to hold competitions to the death without superpowers and such? It was originally called Death X as in the X Games, but I changed it since not going to only involve war on wheels. Thank you for reading so far and I hope you at least tolerate it in the future chapters.
Leigh Aldridge chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
Sounds a bit crazy, like deadman wonderland's twin prison. I wonder what you'll make of this story?