|Reviews for MUSE (ミューズ)|
| Everfew chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
When I started reading this, it made me think of a horror story I recently read, with the concept of logs, and a sort of personnal diary.
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Very informative. Much interesting. Such opening.
Nah, I really liked it. Kept me interested. Especially if you were purposedly trying to be vague, like you mentioned they're monsters btu not what exactly, or about MUSE. Overall, good job ;)
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/5/2014
Good job! Keep up the good work! I really love your story.
| Nori-san chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
I checked the story out because of the concept of noise and sound...and it's not bad at all. Though the front doesn't reveal much, but it seems that the army of NOISE proved to be much of a threat to Japan. I'll have to read more to find out how this will link with the main protagonist eh?
| cud-b-better chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
Well the foreshadowing of what is going to happen has made it pretty obvious. The new characters for what little with seen of them seem to have some personality someone who hacks into a network, someone who appears to be too carefree and someone who doesn't seem to have the slightest cue. But I get the feeling that echo was being a bit of a one trick pony this chapter. But Yuka has regained her sanity and looks like she is raring to lend a helping hand. I'm finally starting to get a feeling of where this story is going now and I can't say I'm complaining.
Just one minor typo I noticed:
finally focused her gaze on the person before [him] - [her]
I look forward to more.
| st.jmon21 chapter 4 . 4/27/2014
Good chapter. I called it. I knew Echo, Tenor, Null and Presto were ACE. Now I'm curious to see that kind of power Echo and Yuka can use.
All and All, this was a good chapter.
| st.jmon21 chapter 3 . 4/23/2014
Interesting Chapter. Echo is really big trouble right now. his equipment is destroyed. How is sing going to help stop the MUSE. I hope Chihiro get there in time without getting killed. Now, I want to take a guess is Echo really a member of ACES. But, he working under the government. That's my guess. I hope I'm right.
Again, Excellent Chapter. I can't wait for the update.
| st.jmon21 chapter 2 . 4/23/2014
Great chapter. Yuka is the only who survived the NOISE. It was really intense. So now, Mio and Suzuki are dead. Yuka is now a MUSE. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| st.jmon21 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Good prologue to start good chapter. I can't for what happens with the NOISE
| cud-b-better chapter 3 . 3/9/2014
A nice chapter I was completely entranced from beginning to end. Yuka going on a rampage, gotta like where that is going. I'm also starting to like Echo a little more now, but I have to say pulling that stunt when someone was unstable, just how stupid is he? Yuka's overpower is nice, but considering what they said couldn't she have destroyed the noise by herself, in that case wouldn't it have been a better choice to leave her to her own devices?
Anyway correction/recommendations take with a grain of salt:
some things that he didn't [knew] - [know]
from Chihiro's [analyses] - [analysis]
[Hisay] stared at her for a while, - [Hisaya]
His jacket was [on] tatters - [in]
everything except his pistols [was] busted. - [were]
I look forward to more.
| xXxd chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
I actually read this back in a while ago, and I like the journal format you used here. It gives us snippets of important events.
Not much about Yuka is revealed for now, although her grandmother, Yukari, does seem to be a caring person.
| Rogue Melody Angel chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
I want to cry my eyes out right about now... Pooe Yuka losing all her friends and even Suzuki, someone she holds just as dear and who in turn loves her, Mio her best briend...
I really do like the story, but please give me hope that she didn't just lose every-one of her friends!
You sure know how to play on the emotional side of a person's heart.
| cud-b-better chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
I guess this Chihiro is the same one from the reports in the prologue. I'm glad that the characters died in the opening chapter when they were introduced, I didn't have time to grow attached to them this way. All I can say is that Yuka is one hell of a tragic heroine, when she starts to get her life back together it is destroyed once again. And it looks like I was wrong about where it happened but I knew that the band was going to have some part in the story, one seems to already have appeared.
Anyway the correction/errors I noticed (take with a grain of salt)
Don't let them hear you [say] that, - [add into sentence]
He told the announcer that he was being [a] pain in the behind. - [add into sentence]
Is that supposed to make [me/you/them] feel better? - [add one of the following to sentence
However, Yuka [did] find it odd. - [add into sentence]
for [the] being so kind to me. - [omit out]
but there [were] no other colors. - [add into sentence]
a huge black dot appeared [in] the screen. - [on]
Our sensor [had] gone haywire in Sector 176! - [have]
all the sensors in the vicinity [was] destroyed! - [were]
My daughters [are going] to that school! - This is just my presumption as this sentence does actually make sense but [go]
get any of the CHOIRs [on] the area - [in]
"Echo?" said [Hasiya] - [Hisaya]
| Rogue Melody Angel chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
I think it's great! Really caught my attention! Hope to read more next week then!
| cud-b-better chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
That diary like thing at the beginning was very well done, it gave me a good grasp about what they were trying to achieve and when it began to go down hill. One thing that I want to know is why the NOISE attack people, do they act on instinct or something like that? But overall you've done well in giving a firm idea of this world's setting, I can already see the disaster about to occur around the corner.
I also look forward to learning just how they actually go about defeating the NOISE.
Anyway like I do for everyone, errors/corrections that I noticed:
I and my team of scientists finally [find] a way to harness - [found]
she and her grandmother had to stay [on] an underground facility - [in]