Reviews for the moon said hello
nonactive chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Oh my goodness, this is so deep.
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Ah...ah...
*jaw is open on the floor
Gah. Why. Why do things like this make me feel this much inside.
I love this.
smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Whoa.

I just...I'm officially envious. You are a damn good writer.

"i didn't have a baby to name after you so i picked a constellation instead"
"the moon said hello to your crumpled corpse when i ask for it to deliver a good-bye"

This poem is, from start to finish, wonderfully written.
Night Skye Tears chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
wow i love this, the last line is stellar ;)
Fandalorian chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
I wont pretend to be even slightly knowledgeable about any form of poetry. What you've got here seems pretty dark and it feels like there's a hidden meaning. I love when a piece of writing does that. Maybe Ive got this completely wrong, but i personally love this.