Reviews for Slime and Snails
Tobiume chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Your poetry is as intriguing as your prose. I like your phrasing here. I especially like the lines "when sinning strikes his fancy" and "brain wheel" and "white dresses only thin coverings/soft petals for the picking" and "make her whimper/make her bleed/fill her crevice/with my seed" and the last stanza.. This is obviously interesting to me on a deeper level than its strength as a poem, but as a poem, it is very good.