Reviews for Sacrifice
GlitteR StuD chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
it soo sad, i loved it soo much.
Irish Rhapsody chapter 1 . 10/27/2002
Great story! Ok so I skimmed it, but I love historical fiction books. So continue with your story! I can't guarantee that I'll read it, but I might if I remember and I'm not feeling particularly lazy...

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musicianmke chapter 1 . 3/4/2002
You should try to develop characters in this. Add some dialogue and you could really flesh out the story. Also, paragraph breaks would help it to make more sense.