|Reviews for Don't Want|
| ThePigeonBrain chapter 1 . 2/22
Hmm, I like the form. The sentences are broken in the most jarring way. Nice. It's completely broken in the beginning, then it gets a little better, but then it breaks down again. It tells a story in itself. I guess the "you" didn't turn out okay after all. After all, you can't be there for someone else, if you're broken yourself.
| A. Ford chapter 1 . 2/19
Sweetheart I need you to be ok!