|Reviews for Veil|
| LDF chapter 1 . 2/22
Hm, interesting. I can follow this...up until halfway through, when the descriptions become too flowery for its own good. 'Slender, razor-edged claws rake through my hair, itself twisting into matted tissues of blackened bone'? So her hair is bone now?
Again, nice intro, just lost itself a bit near the end.