Reviews for Embracing The Storm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't at all understand all the idiocy about how she "lied" to them. She withheld her last name - and they knew that from the beginning. They also knew she had a controlling father who was giving her to a cruel man and she wanted to get away from them both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Much of the story is getting laid out pretty quickly. I'm hoping some more subtle details and emotional tensions come in in later chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! :) I think I noticed that when I did a review before I posted, I thought I fixed it but guess not. :) I'll get on that ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the last line I think you mean 'you are mine' not 'mind' :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! In this chapter you wrote, 'Chase took a step forward and resisted the urge to ripe John's arm off.' I think you mean 'rip' :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() To all the readers, I'm not sure how many of you read the last chapter I uploaded. After uploading it I decided I didn't like what I had, so I revised the chapter a bit. I hope you all enjoy/enjoyed Chase and Deanna's story |
![]() ![]() ![]() my guess is that John is now alpha of Stephen's pack |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will. Hopefully the next chapter will be up sometime tomorrow, or early Tuesday. |
![]() ![]() Update soon please love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Thank you, I may or may not get the next chapter up today/tonight. Woke up this morning feeling a little off, and now I am undeniably sick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do not be nervous at all! I really enjoy your characters, and how you can really connect to them and feel their pain. Love the writting! Once again, I can not wait for more ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter will be coming soon. I'm glad you like it and I hope I wont disappoint you. This is the first time I have let anyone really read my work, and I was actually a little nervous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, and can't wait to see what chase does! Can't wait! |