Reviews for Embracing The Storm
R. Ficst chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
I don't at all understand all the idiocy about how she "lied" to them. She withheld her last name - and they knew that from the beginning. They also knew she had a controlling father who was giving her to a cruel man and she wanted to get away from them both.
R. Ficst chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
Much of the story is getting laid out pretty quickly. I'm hoping some more subtle details and emotional tensions come in in later chapters.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 15 . 3/25/2014
Nice :)
Twizted214 chapter 2 . 3/25/2014
Thank you! :) I think I noticed that when I did a review before I posted, I thought I fixed it but guess not. :) I'll get on that ASAP
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 5 . 3/25/2014
In the last line I think you mean 'you are mine' not 'mind' :)
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 2 . 3/25/2014
Great story! In this chapter you wrote, 'Chase took a step forward and resisted the urge to ripe John's arm off.' I think you mean 'rip' :)
Twizted214 chapter 14 . 3/23/2014
To all the readers, I'm not sure how many of you read the last chapter I uploaded. After uploading it I decided I didn't like what I had, so I revised the chapter a bit. I hope you all enjoy/enjoyed Chase and Deanna's story
MrsHerondale chapter 12 . 3/20/2014
my guess is that John is now alpha of Stephen's pack
Twizted214 chapter 8 . 3/2/2014
I will. Hopefully the next chapter will be up sometime tomorrow, or early Tuesday.
Ashlyn chapter 8 . 3/2/2014
Update soon please love this story
Twizted214 chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
:) Thank you, I may or may not get the next chapter up today/tonight. Woke up this morning feeling a little off, and now I am undeniably sick
MrsHerondale chapter 7 . 2/24/2014
Do not be nervous at all! I really enjoy your characters, and how you can really connect to them and feel their pain. Love the writting! Once again, I can not wait for more ;)
Twizted214 chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
Next chapter will be coming soon. I'm glad you like it and I hope I wont disappoint you. This is the first time I have let anyone really read my work, and I was actually a little nervous.
MrsHerondale chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
Love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
rachel.m.316 chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
I love this story, and can't wait to see what chase does! Can't wait!
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