Reviews for One in his Sights
Roger Jaminson chapter 18 . 12/22/2014
"Your kingdom come, your will be done, on earth as it is in heaven" Im not religious or anything, but that quote came to my mind when i read that last line.
Roger Jaminson chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
His family is treating him like this cause they found out he's gay? Douches.
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 11 . 12/21/2014
Q-Q Poor Daniel, no. I had a feeling that Harvey would do something, but I never thought he'd record the whole thing. I hope nothing bad happens to Aden, too..
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 10 . 12/21/2014
There are some great lines in this. XP "Shit, I forgot the lube" made me lose it. I hope nothing bad happens with Daniel and Aden getting caught though. OAO
gaylord17 chapter 9 . 12/21/2014
I'm sorry, I burst out laughing when he poked it xD
7cm-away-from-you chapter 7 . 3/1/2014
nice to see you updated! but I'm confused, what was that white liquid?
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 7 . 3/1/2014
Oh my God, I was laughing like a maniac at the bathroom scene again... XD Aden is hilarious.

And poor Daniel, again... D: The poor boy is treated so horribly by his family...
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
7cm-away-from-you chapter 6 . 2/26/2014
im confused, is this the end?
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
...Duke Harvey is an asshat, officially an asshat. Poor Daniel!
And my guess as to why his family was treating him like that was right, I assume...
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 5 . 2/24/2014
Aww, poor Daniel again... D':
And hehe, Aden freakin out over sharing toothbrushes. XP
Great chapter again!
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 4 . 2/24/2014
D: Poor Daniel... even the King is an asshat to him... It really makes me wonder what happened to cause that.
And kudos to Aden for standing up to his father! *.*
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 3 . 2/23/2014
Hehe, I knew that Aden and Daniel would have to share a bed. XP
And aw, I hope we get to know Daniel's backstory soon. Poor boy.
And thanks for PM-ing me about this chapter coming out! .
If you don't mind, can you do that with every chapter? I'm kinda scatter-brained, so I might forget to check. O_e"
MellaTheKnightmare chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Yay for updating quickly! ;w;
Awesome chapter, but I feel so bad for Daniel... there's obviously tension with him and his parents...
I hope there's a chapter 3 soon! :3
gaylord17 chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
I enjoyed this, and really want more. Poor Daniel...
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