Reviews for One in his Sights |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Your kingdom come, your will be done, on earth as it is in heaven" Im not religious or anything, but that quote came to my mind when i read that last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His family is treating him like this cause they found out he's gay? Douches. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Q-Q Poor Daniel, no. I had a feeling that Harvey would do something, but I never thought he'd record the whole thing. I hope nothing bad happens to Aden, too.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are some great lines in this. XP "Shit, I forgot the lube" made me lose it. I hope nothing bad happens with Daniel and Aden getting caught though. OAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, I burst out laughing when he poked it xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice to see you updated! but I'm confused, what was that white liquid? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, I was laughing like a maniac at the bathroom scene again... XD Aden is hilarious. And poor Daniel, again... D: The poor boy is treated so horribly by his family... |
![]() ![]() THAT WAS CUM :D? |
![]() ![]() ![]() im confused, is this the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: ...Duke Harvey is an asshat, officially an asshat. Poor Daniel! And my guess as to why his family was treating him like that was right, I assume... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor Daniel again... D': And hehe, Aden freakin out over sharing toothbrushes. XP Great chapter again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: Poor Daniel... even the King is an asshat to him... It really makes me wonder what happened to cause that. And kudos to Aden for standing up to his father! *.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, I knew that Aden and Daniel would have to share a bed. XP And aw, I hope we get to know Daniel's backstory soon. Poor boy. And thanks for PM-ing me about this chapter coming out! . If you don't mind, can you do that with every chapter? I'm kinda scatter-brained, so I might forget to check. O_e" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for updating quickly! ;w; Awesome chapter, but I feel so bad for Daniel... there's obviously tension with him and his parents... I hope there's a chapter 3 soon! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this, and really want more. Poor Daniel... |