Reviews for Pyrrhic
AJAmbrolleigns chapter 27 . 11/17/2014
Oh my f'n gosh, I've been waiting FOREVER for u to update!

I was about to die from anticipation.. :(

I can't wait to see what's been going on with Helmut... He's one of my favorite characters. xD
AJAmbrolleigns chapter 24 . 8/20/2014
I guess everyone is a bit crazy on that island. I can't believe Max just threatened Shawn like that..
Rise of the Rebel chapter 23 . 8/13/2014
Oh no. This is not good for Josh.
Rise of the Rebel chapter 22 . 8/13/2014
WHAT? No! Not Hanako! Oh my god...
AJAmbrolleigns chapter 23 . 8/12/2014
Oh no.. I hope she is not really dead. Please let this be another mind game.. Please let Shinji be hallucinating.. Hanako can't be dead! She was of my favorite characters!
AJAmbrolleigns chapter 19 . 7/25/2014
Amazing story. It's so... Intriguing. I started reading and couldn't stop!
Rise of the Rebel chapter 18 . 7/15/2014
Chapter 18 is a beautiful MJ chapter. I love how she is so devoted to Josh. I also love how, even though she is jealous of Hanako, she defends her. I can't wait for MJ to join Josh and Hanako.

Also, about the TV tropes page: It is so beautiful! I love it!
Rise of the Rebel chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
I do love villains. I'm not sure if I mentioned this before, but Darren is a really well written bad guy. I loved the coffee spit take. :) Poor Honovi.
I hope Josh's brothers can save the students, though. I wonder what else Darren has planned...
Rise of the Rebel chapter 9 . 4/23/2014
No major errors, from what I can see. Another good chapter, nice psychoanalysis and development of the characters. I can't wait to see Josh's family!
Rise of the Rebel chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
One review? Inconceivable! This is a work of art. You balance all these characters so well.
J.M. Black chapter 2 . 3/28/2014
I wasn't able to read the entire chapter, but I hope to finish it soon.
This is very, very well written, and I like the character development.
The only critique I have is that whenever you use the word "However" a comma comes after it.
For example: "However[,] we had to change things to stay on schedule."
Despite this one thing, I am really getting into this story.

Keep writing!