|Reviews for Pyrrhic|
| nonactive chapter 30 . 10/3/2015
I was so happy when I saw that this story had updated! I love your writing.
| xxadarksoulxx chapter 29 . 8/3/2015
This has to be one of the most amazing stories I have read. You made sure to give each and every character a back story and they are so interesting. Each chapter shows us more and more character development and I can't help but love each character in their own ways.
I love Joshua and how he's centered around the story, but only with the Sons of the Constitution, but how he centers around all his classmates, friends and enemies.
I also love how crazy and manipulative Danson is. He is truly looking out for himself to win the game and he does so much crazy shit, it's amazing to read!
I think the one death I was really sad about has to be Hanako's. I had a feeling she would be dying as I read the story, and was upset when she died.
Can't wait to read more chapters! I'm looking forward to your Pyrrich updates!
| nonactive chapter 28 . 6/2/2015
This was a really great chapter, and I'm not just saying that because I'm biased toward Helmut (he's kinda my favorite character). I can't wait to see where you take his character and what you have in store for us in Chapter 29.
Thank you for sharing your story; I know it must have been difficult. I'm so glad to hear that you're feeling better. I hope you experience good fortune and happiness in the future. You're an excellent writer and you deserve much success.
| RaptureRaptor chapter 27 . 5/6/2015
Amazing! I love the detail, as to grammatical or continuity errors I only spotted one or two in the twenty-seven chapters thus far. This is a great story with many elements all combining to create a gritty, realistic, and yet fantastical narrative that has me hooked! Subscribed and waiting for the next update, keep up the great work!
| AJAmbrolleigns chapter 27 . 11/17/2014
Oh my f'n gosh, I've been waiting FOREVER for u to update!
I was about to die from anticipation.. :(
I can't wait to see what's been going on with Helmut... He's one of my favorite characters. xD
| AJAmbrolleigns chapter 24 . 8/20/2014
I guess everyone is a bit crazy on that island. I can't believe Max just threatened Shawn like that..
| nonactive chapter 23 . 8/13/2014
Oh no. This is not good for Josh.
| nonactive chapter 22 . 8/13/2014
WHAT? No! Not Hanako! Oh my god...
| AJAmbrolleigns chapter 23 . 8/12/2014
Oh no.. I hope she is not really dead. Please let this be another mind game.. Please let Shinji be hallucinating.. Hanako can't be dead! She was of my favorite characters!
| AJAmbrolleigns chapter 19 . 7/25/2014
Amazing story. It's so... Intriguing. I started reading and couldn't stop!
| nonactive chapter 18 . 7/15/2014
Chapter 18 is a beautiful MJ chapter. I love how she is so devoted to Josh. I also love how, even though she is jealous of Hanako, she defends her. I can't wait for MJ to join Josh and Hanako.
Also, about the TV tropes page: It is so beautiful! I love it!
| nonactive chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
I do love villains. I'm not sure if I mentioned this before, but Darren is a really well written bad guy. I loved the coffee spit take. :) Poor Honovi.
I hope Josh's brothers can save the students, though. I wonder what else Darren has planned...
| nonactive chapter 9 . 4/23/2014
No major errors, from what I can see. Another good chapter, nice psychoanalysis and development of the characters. I can't wait to see Josh's family!
| nonactive chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
One review? Inconceivable! This is a work of art. You balance all these characters so well.
| J.M. Black chapter 2 . 3/28/2014
I wasn't able to read the entire chapter, but I hope to finish it soon.
This is very, very well written, and I like the character development.
The only critique I have is that whenever you use the word "However" a comma comes after it.
For example: "However[,] we had to change things to stay on schedule."
Despite this one thing, I am really getting into this story.