Reviews for The Outcast
JasmineRaven chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
This is quite a powerful and emotional poem. I don't know whether you deal with depression or not but either way you described the emotions very well in this piece of writing, so I commend you for that.

One thing I will be a bit picky about is grammar, spelling and punctuation. There were quite a few errors, but nothing a quick read through and edit won't pick up on.

On a much more positive note, I thought your use of rhetorical questions was quite effective. I also really liked the part about "nagging whisper of previous sadness" because I can personally say I know what that feels like.

Overall, I did really enjoy reading this poem. Well done! Keep up the good writing. :)

Jaz