Reviews for Juggling |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh texting the ways you can write around this but I found their conversation the best point xD especially when Alice simply replied "Oh my God" and this is just a tiny request but you mentioned Alice had three close friends and it would be interesting to see how she acted around those girls compared to her alone with Misha :))) "I knew I'd be unable to successfully apply eyeliner..." I swore you should have made a comment involving Misha and his eyeliner haha! "... but his eyeliner was perfect. As always." Yes you should have definitely added a comment about how Alice wasn't that skillful with eyeliner lol. and Misha's greeting omggggg: "I just fell down the stairs." hahahaa he's just so great I love him so much! I also love how Alice brushes his comment aside just so she can comment on his outfit wow she's the greatest too like she and Misha both! and their following conversation about the pants geez I just want to insert every word they've exchanged with each other because I love it all hahahaa! wow is it bad if I wanted them to paint each other's nails just because I have never read a scene where a couple has done that? oh I had a feeling where Misha's grandmother wasn't all moth balls perfume and newly baked cookies, but I love her character that's easy to tell how she and Misha are related in a way haha! their sense of humor differs but it's humorous in the end hehe! and yanno every guy who says "she's not my girlfriend!" just means "she's gonna be my girlfriend!" lol oh the band scene was too cute; I loved the comment that the metal band Misha showed first to Alice sounded like a "garbage disposal" to her lmao she's too great I swear. and yaaay Misha comments on Alice's hairdo which means he has his preferences which mean he does like her and he was raMBLING :)))) (omg I apologize if this seems too long for you but every scene is getting to me the longer I read their moments together!) and then "... trying not to appear like the pig I actually was deep down inside." lol again every girl can relate to this because I sure can geeze! I was smiling when Alice let down her hair in the end and omg Misha is the biggest dork behind his leather and punk exterior... your babies are too much :D and I love them! (can I adopt them c:) but then that was it :c oh myyyy I know a lot of authors love to get reviews and though this hadn't updated for about 3 months, I hope my reviews had amused you or something but mostly motivate you to start on another chapter because if this story does not become completed, well, it just adds onto my list of fiction that I want to be completed very very much! seriously tho please update real soon because I really can't express my love for Alice & Misha! btw adding this and you to favorites ;))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's cute and sad that Alice had taken the mom position of the household, hadn't she? (and tell me if I'm overusing the word cute because I feel like I do and I'll try to tone it down.) the relationship between Alice and her dad is a positive point I think since the alcoholism might have placed a distance between the two but I'm glad that they are still close enough as daughter and dad :)))) I mean close enough that Alice would choose her dad over Misha in the way that she chose house-stay as a nurse over more limited time to hang out with the circus juggler :) and speaking of, I was so glad to read about him outside of the circus! and still speaking of, Misha is leaving the circus? just a coincidence that he's told Alice that just two days after he met her again? even though it's be more of a conflict if he left with his circus crew, I was so glad to read that he's staying ahahahahha! and omg his character even gets cuter when he tries to get closer to Alice by the contact sharing moment and then he's rambling which is the most adorable trait of a punk badass like him lol. oh wow I really liked this chapter since all of these events and you really have a knack for giving Alice and Misha likable personas :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I'm amazed at how much Misha has changed even though I expected his character change from your summary! And I really did thought that his tragedy-ridden, hard background fitted Misha's character but I still pity him, yanno? and I really liked the pronto conversation about Misha's accent jus because it's cute :D and he touring her around the circus as a personal guide is too cute OMG this couple is just too cute! I think Alice's dad ships them too which I encourage them to do so haha! I am wondering how this will end when Misha has to go to the next city with his circus... hopefully he and Alice will relish he moments they have now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found it really cute how Alice draws on herself when she was bored since I can relate to that haha (especially a bird but I think the most popular doodles are hearts and flowers which says a lot about Alice? a dreamer I suppose?). I think Alice is a really likable character since she's neither too popular nor too unpopular and she has her own quirks that you had well defined :)))) this chapter had a serious atmosphere yet I think there were choice phrases that still made it somewhat amusing! "... an incredibly lazy teenage girl." this is the definition of 99% of every girl with Internet such as myself lol. and the circus part was so extremely exciting! I loved that Alice had gone off by herself so her lone observations with the circus performers were interesting! then finally finally with Misha i was so excited when he just straight up came up to Alice! and I totally love this description of him: "The quiet Russian boy that I had spent a majority of my childhood with had made a sudden reappearance, clad in black and carrying an air of cockiness that now seemed incredibly infurriating." I have to say this is an incredibly great read from just two chapters... I wonder why else no one would review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() their beginning sounded really cute! it was saddening to hear his disappearances increasing but I like that Alice still had her chance to befriend Misha in their cute quiet way! okay so I'm continuing on :D this is great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much! |