Reviews for Hiding in Plain Sight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool, thank you! |
![]() ![]() love the story |
![]() ![]() Well done. I wish you would continue writing more. Are you doing so elsewhere? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story and great characters. The ending was abrupt in my opinion though suitable anyhow. |
![]() ![]() everything about this story was awesome. I read it all in one day. You are a great writer. |
![]() ![]() Wow, this was great! I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews - you are a talented writer and this story was short but perfect the way it is. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it...I really liked it. This needs more reviews. Enough said. |
![]() ![]() Just absolutely loved this story! You're really talented and I wish you'd write more on will and iris. I'd really like to see more wris :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! it showered me in cute feels, thanks for writing this hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, so I read this and all of your other stories today instead of revising...thanks for the procrastination! All of your stuff is really good but I think this is my favourite just because you can properly develop characters since it's longer. I particularly loved the ending because you managed to avoid making it too obvious. Thank-you for putting such good writing on this site :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I love all your stories and can't wait for the next one to come out! You're great at actually giving depth to characters, even in just a few chapters, and sparks really fly in your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story! It was unpredictable and charming. I thought the pacing and dialogue were spot on, and the characters felt realistic, rather than being stereotypes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute story! I'm loving your one shots too! You've got great stories, and I hope you keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Amazing story! This is just the type of story that I love. I am surprised at the number of reviews it has though. I hope you keep writing these fantastic masterpieces. I can't get enough. - Christina |
![]() ![]() I think you have a great start of a story here. I like it but it would have been better if you didn't skip all those weeks in between their meetings and maybe had more run ins between the two. You have got some serious talent. -Sullivan89 |