Reviews for Mein Herr |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. He's awfully probing into her past and not very forthcoming with his own. It's curious to me regarding a couple of statements / implications. I wonder if her dad is his stepfather? Might be the reason he so adamantly wants to help her in some way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Colden is such a mysterious character, and isobel's childhood is so sad! This was a great chapter, thank you for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beyond amazing.I love the way you have made Mr. Cade seem mysterious yet interested in Isobel. My only critique would be to stop making Isobel such a push over. I love it, but it gets frustrating when Cade is taking over everything. Favorite current story i am reading on fiction press is this one right here! Stay golden! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh I love this! I hope to read more soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eek. Colden is so hot. I'm so excited about this story, I'm totally eating it up! Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a great chapter, im guessing he bought the book for her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought I reviewed this already, and realized I neglected to do so. I really enjoyed reading your first chapter and hope to see another one soon! Your characters promise to be very interesting! Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Cant wait for the next (hopefully coming soon :D) one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I LOVE this! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Great opening chapter! Well written and loved the way you introduced the characters and plot. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice beginning to your story. You've got some great sounding characters. Looking forward to more. |