Okay, this has ten more chapters as of now, and I'm already about to cry because there isn't more. I'm so lucky that I found this wonderful story!

Totally laughing my butt off right now because I thought Dean was Dean River's first name.
Okay, so into chapter two, and I am going to steal the words of a certain character from The Incredibles: This is totally wicked! I'm in love (screw Colden making Isobel swoon, you're making ME swoon).

*screaming at screen*

WHAT?! NOOOOOO!
*more screaming*
(She's addicted to this story and has been secretly stalking it xP. Update or she might have a heart attack XD.)

I absolutely love this story. Throughout the entire thing, I was captivated. You literally have the ability to write, create girl porn without there even being a sex scene, and never have anything too graffic. Even when she got kidnapped it was the right amount of torture. You are an amazing author, and I cant wait to read more. Please continue, and I hope at some point, you continue this with a publisher. I think you could be extremely successful. :)

Wow. I did not see that coming. Can't wait to see what happens next

Total Cliff-hanger. Loved it!

Probably should have seen something like that coming... Silly me.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, and whether or not Colden actually cares. And if he does, how Isobel responds to his illegal activities if they stay together. Or get together again.

I am desperately hoping Colden saves her. Or better yet she proves to be no DID and saves herself. Either way, I'm sure you won't disappoint.

Happy writing

I'm at work, but couldn't resist reading. Holy crap, my stomach is in knots. You freaking nailed it. I can't even think right now. I hope and pray Colden is just screwing with this guy. I don't want him to be an awful person, I love him :(. I'll have to read this again when I get home, but just know this is one of the most intense things I've read on fictionpress. You're brilliant.

That was a freaking awesome chapter! I knew it was something illegal he was doing but I just couldn't figure out what it was. I'm hoping all that grandstanding was for show because it would make sense to act disinterested if he knew they wanted a reaction. I hope that's the case because if not than Colden sucks big time lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG! Great reveal! Intense chapter but definitely a great read. Well done! I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Isobel she needs to stay strong! Colden better hurry up and at least save her. Least he could do Haha can't wait for the next chapter!

*sobs in hysteria* I-Im such so hurt! Omg, I felt this chapter like I've never felt any chapter of my entire life! I want to cry so badly, this chapter was amazingly written... but it was so heart wrenching! Oh my gosh... HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO POOR ISOBEL! HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US WITH SUCH AN INTENSE CLIFF HANGER AFTER SUCH AN INTENSE CHAPTER?! AHHHHHHHHHH! I want pull my hairs out of my scalp!
Wow... You did an amazing job though, truly. I think this was your break thru moment in the story, so far. I'm in love with you! I don't think I'll be getting over this chapter for a LOOOOOOOOONG while. So please, Please, PLEEEEEEEEEEASE update as soon as possible. Cuz I might just lose my sanity if you don't...

O. M. G

Dude that was awesome! I know Cade was totally playing the Russian and faking his feelings but I guess the pressure Isobel was under made it easier to believe what he was saying. The fact that Cade was on his Iphone made me grin ;-)

Yeah the violence was getting gory but it was realistic and suspenseful. I'm glad Jarred is gone. At least Isobel finally knows what Cade does. Awesome stuff ;-)

Oh dear. I'm assuming he's acting bored and disinterested to actually save her. I hope she'll understand that eventually.

I need you to update again... Like NOW. I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what happens next. Best story I've read on FP in awhile.