this was really helpful tnx:)

I should've reviewed this earlier, but better late than never, right? XD
I like how you make a lot of good points about this topic, and I especially liked the last line. :D

-Sunny

I was definitely not smiling when I saw the bold that totally must be directed towards the farmers, and I was definitely not laughing at the YOLO because I am mature...Just kidding, I did those things! I really liked your essay, especially since I'm sure there would be a lot of hate from teens/kids and support from adults. And yeah, I'm one of those people who sit on a electronic all day, but I like it 'cause I'm lazy like a potato. :D

Overall, nice job! You expressed your opinion well and it flowed nicely. Props to you and good luck!

Cheers,
Gone