|Reviews for Love That Lasts|
| Vortex007 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
I have a huge problem understanding your third line... of the this chapter.
"I hope my mom had cooked something disgusting."
Okay... nothing is wrong with it... Then you go ahead, and say "an accident took mom, and dad from us."
Whoa... Either they are dead, and she forgot about it , or the girl has a ghost making her lunches...
| Sakshi chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
A lovely writter is comm for future, and I'm very happy for u. It was a lovely story but id have had a happy ending...!)
| vania chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This story perfectly describes the way I would feel if I had had an elder brother or sister. Make the story a bit longer.
| Shruti chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Owww! So sad. Such a heart warming and sweet story but I wish if it had a happy ending.