Reviews for A Goddess Wears Orange |
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![]() ![]() Hey sis! Yep it does clear a lot of things! And I loved this chapter and how Yumi finally figured out Ren's feelings for her ! I love Ren! *dreamy sigh* Not as much as Miguel though :) |
![]() ![]() P.S thanks for the preview |
![]() ![]() I love it soooooo much, I like how much Yumi went to make Ren confess . I can really relate to Yumi when she was going back to the cafe and could not belive what she just did. I think you got the stuff really good this chapter, cause so far it's my favorite. Can't wait till the next chapter (hint hint) and the dance! |
![]() ![]() I'm happy you updated on my birthday, but I 'm not so happy that the last two chapters are just repeats. I can be patient, though, haha. |
![]() ![]() We want update ! We need update ! Update ! Update ! Update ! |
![]() ![]() Your welcome, (insert what I call you here )! Oh yeah, will Yumi ever be able to feel the threads that connect to her again? Maybe when Ren and her get togethr ? Also, how come you have not yet mentioned Halia yet ? What's the "secret" plan ? I hope the other 4 stories will be this good ! - Anonymous reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait what? Yumi still didn't figure out that the reason she can't read Ren's love thread, is because he loves her? And laurence has been pretty clear in saying that she can't read her own threads. Speaking of Laurence...he's in love with that other woman, but still likes Yumi? And from what he's said, it seems like he has a crush on her.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are Ren's threads growing dimmer? Is it because he's giving energy to Yumi or is he keeping a big secret, one which would also explain why Yumi can't read his love thread? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhh cool! 3 updates at once! They almost kissed! :)) And I bet Yumi can't see Ren's love thread because he's in love with her...It's sort of confusing and I'm really curious to find out what it's all about, and why Yumi thought Ren was in love with her sister.. |
![]() ![]() So this is how the oranges come into play. I know I've mentioned this before but it needs to be repeated: your story is amazing! The writing is great. I see no grammatical errors. The pacing is just right. The plot is intriguing. And you effectively convey Yumi's thoughts and emotions. I can seriously feel her pain. |
![]() ![]() This was a pretty intense chapter, haha. That was some great use of imagery, too. |
![]() ![]() I like how you didn't start off the story right when she got her powers. |
![]() ![]() The story already seems amazing! I'm Filipino and I recognized the whole Ate/sister thing. It's prety cool since I hardly read stories about Filipinos. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPLOAD! |
![]() ![]() LOVE IT. I like that Yumi has plenty of flaws, but she always admits to them (with some help from Ren) and works hard to fix any wrong doing. More Ren and Yumi scenes please! They are so cute together :D |