Reviews for Leaving
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Hello you! Mad to see someone who has reviewed me time ago still on this site, most of the old crowd have left... Meh.

Love the poem, it's full of stark and bitter imagery, which is normally my favourite type to chew over. I feel the ice-like chill of a dying love here, reminds me of a saying by Shan Sa,

Love is like a soft pillow, with a knife at the throat.

Any way, great read, glad to have caught you (I used to be called the un-great-ful, but I changed it).

Take care,

Alan.
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
I love this poem.. and I understand it's magnitude. My soul goes out to you..