Reviews for lamentations of a liar
The Beautiful Filth chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
It's breathtaking. I can see the desperation within chaos, and I love the idea.

-Christie
smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
o: Sweetie, this is beautifully written. What you consider an experiment, I find a natural talent.
WarriorArnelle chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Huh... Very interesting concept here! I like the idea of getting inside the person's head, seeing their thoughts; it actually sounds just like when someone thinks. All jumbled together, but somehow it still makes sense. I like it.
Written In Red chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
I think my favorite phrase in this poem is "I'm hypnotized with these wonderfully pretty pathological lies". I can definitely see that you write with much emotion. Pouring your heart onto the page can be very powerful when your heart is the home of Jesus Christ!

Keep writing!