Reviews for Flee!
Michelle Lee chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
This was a short but very intriguing poem, I liked the repetition and imagery used. I actually would be interested in seeing this as a story or longer poem - well, the story behind it, the moral, it's really good. keep up the great writing :)
Unknownvoid chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Wow. That made me tear up! I love how if you don't read the Bible verse you don't know what its talking about! Good writing
Juliet Penrose chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
This is really good, I like the symbolism and imagery. I also like how you put a reference to scripture, it makes the meaning of the poem even more understandable. Great job!
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Oooh, I like it. The use of the single period at the end was okay, but what I would have done was made the B in Before lowercase and maybe italicized the phrase, just for more of an eerie emphasis...just a suggestion.
"Claws stained daily in shades of red/Match with gaze of demonic trance" — good line, good job!