Reviews for Falling
PrixieD chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Hey the story was pretty well written. I loved how you were describing the scenes at intervals of the distance covered. Good work! :)
cupcake123 haha chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Wow. like, wow. that was. . . intense. i like how you did that metre thing. it's an interesting concept. (although a bit disconcerting, cos around here , it's spelled ad "meter" you see? but that's alright!) writing was good, too, although i somehow get the feeling that your vocab is far, FAR better.

Anyhoo, great job!1