Reviews for Fallen angels
93BNMill chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
There's something about this that makes me think of a war and that these two fallen angels have been fighting through it. A sort of weakness or a lack of will to go on when alone, but passion and a will that can overcome anything when together - a love that is hard to come by and harder to hold onto to.

It's a story all its own, a whispered promise of a soul's yearning to love.
Jazzball chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
A dream sweet, love this woman from so few words. Good stuff, not so much for her.
My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
This is beautiful! I love the details that you put in the poem to show that they were both weak, but strong when fighting for the other.