Reviews for The Heart of Fin |
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![]() ![]() Thanks for updating, looking forward to the tournament! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, after exams are finally done I come to my computer and I am greeted by the end, and what a beautiful end it is. This story was simply amazing and I am so happy I found Birthday Presents and then you continued it with this lovely piece of literature. You are simply a splendid author Augie and you should be very proud of yourself to have such a wonderful and active imagination. You are able to draw the reader in with a single word and weave a web of wonder and brilliance. Thank you for writing this story, I actually shed a few tears when I reached the end, it was a splendid story as stated before. You have done brilliantly and you can tell that as each chapter has progressed you have grown as an author in leaps and bounds. I hope you have an excellent week :) :) :) :) :) As always excellent grammar and spelling :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just learned that I could use my FanFiction account for FictionPress - so I can finally keep track of your works! I absolutely love this series. I would definitely love to see more of Sasha Suter! Or perhaps Emron's side? It doesn't matter to me, I just love all the characters. :) Can't wait to see more, if you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Loved it! It was a great exercise in seeing more of Sasha staying true to her character, seeing some of Morty's problems as royalty, and seeing the awkward and horrible effects of non-con with a male victim and female perpetrator (even though we only get a vague sense of what happened). I would love to see more of Sasha and Morty at the tournament, with the masters, developing their martial arts, and how the Queen and her brother deal with the difficulties of politics and marriage. Also, more of Emron, Romlan, Orion, Tessa, and Squalt. Will something develop between any of them? Much love to you and your craft. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us. Very much enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee! I like the Firefly reference for Orion's last line in the AN. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What it's over! great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story has ended! It was so sudden! I demand an epilogue. I find the issue of man-rape being thrust rather suddenly into the end of the story seem rather rushed. I want to see Sasha and Morty work it out together! Perhaps the epilogue can be a couples counselling session? As always, loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! *starts fist pumping happily* Oh gosh I just love this chapter, again you have reduced me to large smiles and a puddle of raw emotion. Thank you so much for posting such an amazing and heartwarming chapter. I love your writing, I truly do. There is simply so many wondrous things about it; the ability to make one smile at a simple sentence and to make you feel as if your heart is in your throat on the next. Your grammar and spelling is excellent. The way you have spun this lovely tale is simply unbelievable. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, this story has become a safe haven for me and it is simply stupendous. An outstanding ovation :) :) :) :) :) I loved Emron in this chapter and just want to give him a big hug. Hope you have an amazing week :) :) :) Im so happy for the extra update :) :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Woohoo! It's a new chapter! (AND a new GoT episode all in one day!) Loved it, loved it. Why do I get the feeling that Morty will win Sasha back? Emron seems to be further and further out of the romantic picture... Oh well, I do love a happy ending... which is what we're going to get, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ….The Feels…just too many feels. I am literally staring at my computer screen begging for more words, to know more, for there to simply be some inclination as to what will happen. Oh gosh I just can't put into words what I want to say so this might be a short review. In other words this chapter was just a dollar coaster of feelings that involved slow cracks appearing in my heart for Sasha. I just love this story and this chapter was beautiful. Thank you so very much for writing such a lovely chapter…..oh den feels. :) :) :) :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No way! There are only two more chapters left? I thought there was going to be eighteen in total! This all happened too quickly ): I really look forward to the following chapters! Although I haven't been reviewing, I'd like to say that I always look forward to read each and every chapter. They never disappoint me (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Will Morty win Sasha's heart or will she slip from his grasp? Perhaps they'll bond in the upcoming tournament? |
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