Reviews for Borrowed Treasure
Michelle Lee chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
I love this, this is beautiful; I like how you have written it and that you bring it all back to truth in God.

in the line "God this burdens too weighty! This burdens too great!" did you mean it to be "God this burden's too weighty..." ?
Unknownvoid chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Awesome. Just awesome. Well done!
Clara E. Taylor chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
This is a beautiful poem with precious sentiments not understood by many men or women. May I suggest that God is a Man? Jesus is 100% Man and 100% God (last stanza, sixth line), or else He could not have died for us.
Menginpeh chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Beautifully written!